Lunar Requiem

FLiGHT again, and once more my princess is in another castle.

I'm glad that my fic was posted; I'm actually working on chapter two of "Nothing Personal" and an introspective on Will. Before I do that, though, I'm always looking for ways to improve, so if it's not too much trouble, I'd like to ask for constructive criticism so I can improve in the upcoming chapters of the fiction. Was there anything anyone liked about the fic? Is there anything I can improve on or something that shouldn't have happened (i.e. technical terms being gotten wrong, etc.)? I've already begun working on the second part (it's looking to be a three-part fic so far), so any feedback at all, even negative, would be very much appreciated.

Another thing is that I'm nervous of my characterization of NiGHTS as seen here: http://eternitydreamer.livejournal.com/profile S/he is set after the events of Journey of Dreams, so naturally there are massive spoilers in the profile, but hir logs are linked to right on the profile page, and if the link "eternitydreamer" is clicked there are entries there that can be looked through. I think I have room for improvement, so I'd like opinions on my portrayal of NiGHTS as well, if no one minds.

Hopefully this is allowed here (I looked over the rules again and there didn't seem to be a problem); if not, please feel free to tell me off/delete it.

Thank you all very much for taking the time to read this. <3

Hello, all! For those of you who don't know me, I am Flight. I've been a fan of NiGHTS ever since the first game came out.

Anyway, I play NiGHTS over at Paixao RPG on Livejournal. I recently convinced a couple of friends of mine to apply for Reala and Jackle over there, and somehow this led to a discussion on Batman.

Then we combined the two, but there was a bit of a problem. If Jackle is Scarecrow and Reala, as NiGHTS' biggest and most frightening rival, is the Joker, does that make NiGHTS Batman?

Then, of course, we came to the conclusion that we are very, very strange.

Has anyone else had any cracky crossovers concerning NiGHTS?

I am applying for NiGHTS at a fairly well-known RPG, and I can't find any pictures of NiGHTS various expressions. So far, I have attempted to make images from the concept art,but are there any colored pictures of NiGHTS with various (angry, sad, bored, amused, etc.) expressions? I try to avoid using fan art.

Any help will be greatly appreciated. Thank you!

EDIT: I now have enough images. THank you to everyone who helped!

Hello, I'm FLiGHT. I've loved the NiGHTS game (well series now ) since I was... I think 11. IT was completely unlike any other game I've ever seen, between normal kids dealing with normal kid stuff and the flying. I've only recently finished NiGHTS: Journey of Dreams earlier this month; I couldn't put it down and the ending made me cry. XD I absolutely loved it, Bonamba boss and all (stupid cats).

Aside from NiGHTS, I love ballet (Swan Lake is my absolute favorite), roleplaying (I play Aerith, Otogi Ryuuji, and a bunch of others in fandom RPs and I'm a D&D player), and music of most sorts.

Anyway, that's it for the TL;DR intro. XD Thank you for reading~!