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NiGHTS-inspired poem

Started by NOTiC, Jun 01 2007 12:41 AM

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NOTiC
Posted 01 June 2007 - 12:41 AM

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"Moonlit Wakening"

On NiGHTS
When the purpled charcoal sky
Hints with a smile
A time to graze under the cosmic whales
I ascend to the candlelit clouds
And caress the moon,
Watching the gems on my ringed fingers
As drops of sparkle and shine
Run through them like a stream.

A liquidly body of rippling ultramarine
Lies glistening below me,
And entices me
To swiftly glide across it,
Laughing with my reflection,
Whilst bushy, lamb-like maples
Invisibly stare
At the festivities untold,
Above lands soothingly shaded in cerulean.

My desire is to share this secret.
So I draw myself
To a dreamer's window sill,
And I gaze at her blue cheek,
As I gift her with dreams of my adventures
And expressions of my hopes
Of one day
Collecting every star.

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Huruyami
Posted 01 June 2007 - 12:51 AM

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That is very pretty. Written in blank verse, no? (for those of you non-poetry junkies thats a poem written in unryhmed iambic pentametar.) What can i say, I love poetry. But that is a wonderful poem, you have a knack for poetry.

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Chan Kaylore
Posted 01 June 2007 - 04:50 AM

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Oh wow, I love the imagery to this! Gave me a sense of gliding serenely through Spring Valley at night <3

You have a beautiful knack of words, keep it up!

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animejosse
Posted 01 June 2007 - 01:50 PM

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What a beautiful poem.

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Zero 22
Posted 01 June 2007 - 02:07 PM

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Wow great poem ^________^

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Posted 01 June 2007 - 02:56 PM

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It truly is. Good job there.

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~Tsuki~
Posted 01 June 2007 - 09:36 PM

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Ooooh that's beautiful~! <3's~ ^___^ You have a talent for words. I can picture it perfectly in my mind.

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NOTiC
Posted 06 June 2007 - 01:35 AM

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it's now a certified published poem

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Posted 06 June 2007 - 03:47 AM

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cool. There's strong evidence of a lot of thoght going into this.
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