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[Chronos]

here are my latest drawing of NiGHTS into Dreams that i drew. the rest are in my DA if u want to c more.

NiGHTS




Reala



NiGHTS and Reala looking at the Night Sky



plz what u think of it and what can i do better and how u liked it

[Inubu]

O.M.G!They are sooo cute!I love this to DEATH!

[Chronos]

O.M.G!They are sooo cute!I love this to DEATH!

y thank you! ^.^

[Sweep]

yeah i think the eyes are very cute! they look so chibi :3

[Wrenreele]

You basically asked for a critique, so here I go.

You art has amazing potential, with some practice and patcience.

You've drawn them with very similar eyes, I feel differating their eyes would make the pieces look a little less generic and give the characters some defining differences.
Giving the characters more rounded and less... straight... bodies might. Example, in the first NiGHTS picture, her leg looks like it's suddenly out there, instead of rounding its way out there. Know what I am saying?
Your moons need some work. It looks like you drew the characters first and then added the moons after. I suggest, if this is the case, to sketch out your background before heading to the foreground.
Just a few helpful hints, and things I noticed that needed to be worked on.

:] Would like to see moar in the future!

[~Tsuki~]

Those are really adorable. ^^ <3's~ Keep up the great work.

[LUCiD-STUDENT]

Just some additional critiquing comment, hope I'm not forcing in on your territory Wren.

First off, Wrenreele comment about the legs on NiGHTS (as well as for the other drawings) are true, as at the moment your drawings are rather two-dimensional (a simple mistake performed by many starting artists from what I can tell). Try adding more depth to your characters, even Craig McCracken, creator of the Powerpuff Girls (I don't know if this is the exact style you're moving toward) uses different kinds of perspective (as simple as noticing the small differences between how one leg looks longer than the other depending on how its positioned). I also have to say that its an excellent suggestion made by Wrenreele, the relationship between a character and their background and be key to a composition.
If you want any reccomendations, I could give you links to several tutorials, but otherwise its a good beginning effort. Keep drawing and keep practicing.

Also, just a small warning, don't get too wrapped up in people's compliments. Either way, your skills can always be improved and (if their comment is negative) the only person you should worry about making happy is yerself.

Any other critiquing Wren?

[Wrenreele]

Just some additional critiquing comment, hope I'm not forcing in on your territory Wren.

First off, Wrenreele comment about the legs on NiGHTS (as well as for the other drawings) are true, as at the moment your drawings are rather two-dimensional (a simple mistake performed by many starting artists from what I can tell). Try adding more depth to your characters, even Craig McCracken, creator of the Powerpuff Girls (I don't know if this is the exact style you're moving toward) uses different kinds of perspective (as simple as noticing the small differences between how one leg looks longer than the other depending on how its positioned). I also have to say that its an excellent suggestion made by Wrenreele, the relationship between a character and their background and be key to a composition.
If you want any reccomendations, I could give you links to several tutorials, but otherwise its a good beginning effort. Keep drawing and keep practicing.

Also, just a small warning, don't get too wrapped up in people's compliments. Either way, your skills can always be improved and (if their comment is negative) the only person you should worry about making happy is yerself.

Any other critiquing Wren?

You basically summed it up. That's exactly what I was trying to say, but you had better words for it. :]
I believe the artist has amazing potential, though.

[KyraWolf]

Pretty much what they said. xD

These are REALLY cute though! 8D