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Stunted Growth


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Not sure how many of you guys do fanfiction on here, but I find it helpful to hone my skills for my own original works. Anyways, here's a NiGHTS story I started that I hope ya'll will enjoy called Stunted Growth (AO3 Mirror).

 

Basically it's about a child star growing up and becoming unwilling to let go of the childhood he never had, and thus is unable to possess two important Ideya: Growth and Courage. Along the way, NiGHTS and the NiD/JoD protagonists try to help him find himself and move past his childhood obsession. It's gonna be my first time exploring angst and using dreams as a way to cling on to a past you never truly had.

 

Any constructive criticism would be much welcomed. :)



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Pretty much everything is phenomenal. It's a bit monotonous at points though, maybe too much telling and not enough showing? I dunno, I'm not really a writer.






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