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This poem I wrote

Started by Musashi_HUmar, Oct 19 2011 04:32 PM

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Musashi_HUmar
Posted 19 October 2011 - 04:32 PM

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So yeah, its a poem. Check it out and let me know what you think.


Title: Sleep


"Somewhere far beyond the sands of time
lies a place filled with wonder
and utter enchantment
Come take my hand and I'll bring you there

Drift away with me
and see all the things you thought unreal
The destination is but a journey
and the thrill is worth a life time

Now is the time for alleviation
from events so mundane
You can see rainbows
and things of such splendor

Close your eyes
and take a step
Your voyage is
beginning once more"

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Posted 20 October 2011 - 04:34 PM

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I write poetry often, and I have to say this is quite good. I especially like the second stanza, it feels like something that I would write.

Is this your first poem? Just interested.

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Posted 21 October 2011 - 02:00 AM

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It's beautiful...have you thought of setting it to music?

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Posted 21 October 2011 - 03:43 AM

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CROSSSiNG: This is far from my first poem. I've a fairly experienced hand at writing poetry, song lyrics, and other such things. I've been at this since I was about 16 or so. I'm going to be 21 soon. :)

Nocturne: Yes, I have thought about setting it to music. When I wrote it, I had Ronnie James Dio type stuff in mind. :)

Thank you both for the compliments! They mean a lot. :)

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Posted 22 October 2011 - 12:51 AM

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It's pretty good. I'm awful with poetry, myself, but I really like this.

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Posted 22 October 2011 - 02:41 AM

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It's pretty good. I'm awful with poetry, myself, but I really like this.

Anything worth doing requires lots of time and practice. :)

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Posted 23 October 2011 - 04:20 AM

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Your poem is very nice. I've read it more than twice. B)
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