Lemme know if I'm meant to post in an existing thread. ^^;
The basic outline of the story is thus:
A small, child-like Nightmaren(Keylime) has accidentally wandered into Nightopia. He's a small, weak Nightmaren, so he can't fight much. A group of 'Pians(about 10 or so) spot him, and, upon seeing how helpless he is, begin to pick on him. Of course, poor little Keylime can't do much to fight back, so he sits there and cries while the 'Pians make fun of him. NiGHTS eventually wanders by and approaches the group, wanting to know what's up. When he sees what the 'Pians are doing, he scolds them and sends them off, annoyed. He bends down to Keylime's level, asks him who he is, what's wrong, etc. Keylime tells him that he's from Nightmare, but he got lost. At first, NiGHTS is unsure about what he could do to help. He eventually decides that he'll have to help Keylime get back home somehow. The bulk of the story deals with NiGHTS trying to get through Nightmare w/o getting caught, etc. In the end, Keylime manages to get back with NiGHTS' help.
That's the rough idea, I might tweak it a bit. Lemme know what you think, guys. ^^;
EDiT: Here's a quick, flat-color doodle of Keylime, he's about half NiGHTS' size:
Again, lemme know what you think. :3 Any of you are welcome to re-draw him, too.
btw, that's hair, not a 'Maren-hat. ;P
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Ok, only got a VERY basic idea of a short little chapter/story/whateveritssupposetobecalled, bare with me.
A Meeting
Basic idea is thus: It's a few hours before NiGHTS decides to leave Nightmare for good. He's on his way to Reala's quarters(or wherever he stays) to say goodbye when he happens to brush by Selph in the hallway. (working on pic of my rendition of Selph, will post in a few days or so). Selph, being the first Nightmaren, can easily sense NiGHTS' current feelings. Selph tells NiGHTS that he will regret turning against his own kind, and that it will haunt him until the end of his days. (the two talk about it for a few moments) The prototype Nightmare continues on his way, but NiGHTS yells..Something to him. I'm still thinking it out. But it'll be dramatic, I assure you. xD
Suggestions got this would be greatly appreciated!
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A Rescue | A Meeting
Started by iNSOMNiAC, Feb 12 2008 04:25 PM
#1
Posted 12 February 2008 - 04:25 PM
#2
Posted 12 February 2008 - 04:48 PM
I automatically like anything that challenges the whole "nightopia = good, nightmare = bad" cliche. This makes me feel fuzzy inside. Yes.
#3
Posted 12 February 2008 - 04:49 PM
So do I. XD There's gotta be bully-Pians and whiny-Maren running around, else it'd be /too/ perfect and both worlds would be unbalanced. =P
That's how I look at it, anyways. oo;
That's how I look at it, anyways. oo;
#4
Posted 12 February 2008 - 08:15 PM
gijinka.
hmm he looks like lyserg *lol*
#5
Posted 12 February 2008 - 09:54 PM
Sa-chan, I think I love you. X3 You made my day. ^w^ *gets back to doodling storyish ideas*
#6
Posted 12 February 2008 - 10:11 PM
I've got to draw him being taunted by pians, just gotta do it. XD
#7
Posted 12 February 2008 - 10:34 PM
I'm wondering if NiGHTS and Key outta run into any actual 'Maren(bosses, etc) on their way to Nightmare. Hmm...If they did, who?
#8
Posted 13 February 2008 - 01:08 AM
Puffy? Donbalon? xD Or or.... CHAMELAN? God, I hate that lizard so, so much... xD
#9
Posted 13 February 2008 - 01:18 AM
Chamelan would probably try to eat Key, which would be hilarious.
I'm thinkin' this outta be a mix of serious and gag. XD
I'm thinkin' this outta be a mix of serious and gag. XD
#10
Posted 28 February 2008 - 06:18 PM
Bumpy!
Another story idea's been posted, check the original post! 8D
Another story idea's been posted, check the original post! 8D
#11
Posted 28 February 2008 - 11:03 PM
Awsome iNSOMNiAC! looking forward to both storys!
*tries to imagine Chamelion eating Key and bursts out laughing*
*tries to imagine Chamelion eating Key and bursts out laughing*
#12
Posted 29 February 2008 - 01:47 AM
*giggles* Key would cute his way out of it. XD gawd, I can't believe something as adorable as him came out of /my/ twisted mind. Too bad my art doesn't do him justice. @@;
I've been swamped with assignments from every class, mentally beat down by most of my classmates, sucky week, don't want to work, etc.
Selph's pic will probably be delayed for a whiiiiile. TT_TT Sorry people.
I've been swamped with assignments from every class, mentally beat down by most of my classmates, sucky week, don't want to work, etc.
Selph's pic will probably be delayed for a whiiiiile. TT_TT Sorry people.
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